where do the commas go.
WESLEY JUMPED OFF HIS OLD RUSTY BIKE. BENDING LOW TO THE GROUND HE CREPT TOWARDS THE HAUNTED HOUSE. AS HE REACHED THE DOOR A HUGE SPIDER LEAPT INTO HIS HAIR WITH A LOUD SQUEAK. REACHING OUT HIS SHAKING HAND HE RATTLED THE DOOR HANDLE. THE ANCIENT DOOR CREAKED MOANED AND GROANED.
(Not a teacher)
I would definitely put commas after the following words: ground, hand, creaked, and moaned.
The comma would seem optional after the words old and door (first use).
Last edited by Greg Forbes; 09-Nov-2008 at 06:17. Reason: specify word