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    john123321 is offline Newbie
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    Unhappy Please help correct!!!!

    Please can you help me correct these sentences and ecplain why they are ambiguous or gramatically incorrect! Im stupmed!


    1. If a dog fouls the playground put it in a plastic bag
    2. Each of the staff members are required to complete the form

    3. The procedures are enclosed for staf use; They are coloured grey

    4. Head teachers must devise a suitable system, as described in the report

    5. The small pupil identification number is shown below
    6. The design of computer systems are always carried out by an qualified engineer
    7. The team has had many meetings and reccomend the following action
    8. The school, which won the
    compotition cheated
    9. The teacher completed a plan working over the weekend

    10. Teachers who use this
    assesment frequently can identify problems at an early stage


    Thanks in advance!! please reply asap

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Default Re: Please help correct!!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by john123321 View Post
    Please can you help me correct these sentences and ecplain why they are ambiguous or gramatically incorrect! Im stupmed!


    1. If a dog fouls the playground put it in a plastic bag What are you putting into the bag?
    2. Each of the staff members are required to complete the form
    "Each" is singular; "are" is plural.
    3. The procedures are enclosed for staf use; They are coloured grey
    What is coloured?
    4. Head teachers must devise a suitable system, as described in the report
    What is described?
    5. The small pupil identification number is shown below
    What is small?
    6. The design of computer systems are always carried out by an qualified engineer
    "Design" = singular; "are" = plural
    7. The team has had many meetings and recommend the following action "has had" = singular"; "recommend" = plural
    8. The school, which won the
    competition cheated
    9. The teacher completed a plan working over the weekend
    What is working over the weekend?
    10. Teachers who use this
    assessment frequently can identify problems at an early stage What does "frequently" relate to?


    Thanks in advance!! please reply asap
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