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    changeling is offline Newbie
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    Default please, check my sentences

    Hi everybody!

    Could you, please, check my sentences? I want to make sure my English makes sense :))

    It’s interesting that hanging up with childhood mates pleases us more than relations we made in adulthood. Although women need less friends and acquaintances than men, the relationship between women – contrary to controversial wisdom about impossibility of female friendship – is much stronger.


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    kattie is offline Newbie
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    Default Re: please, check my sentences

    Not a teacher :)

    It’s acknowledged of / It seems that hanging up (out) with the childhood mates (friends) pleases us more than relations we made have made in our adulthood. Although women need less friends and acquaintances than men, the relationship between women – contrary to controversial wisdom about impossibility of female friendship (i don't understand what you mean here)– is much stronger.

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