Results 1 to 2 of 2
  1. #1
    Unregistered Guest

    Please, can you check my writing?

    I received your e-mail and I talked with Stephanie about your points.

    She is in the meeting at the moment though she is aware of you e-mail and will give you an answer at the end of the morning, as the meeting will end.

    Have a good day.

  2. #2
    sarat_106 is offline Key Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • English Teacher
      • Native Language:
      • Oriya
      • Home Country:
      • India
      • Current Location:
      • India
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    2,129
    Post Thanks / Like

    Exclamation Re: Please, can you check my writing?

    I received your e-mail and (I) talked (with) to Stephanie about your points.

    She is in
    a (the) meeting at the moment though she is aware of your e-mail and will give you an answer after the meeting.(at the end of the morning, as the meeting will end.)
    Delete words in brackets

    The corrected text is as follows.
    I received your e-mail and talked to Stephanie about your points. She is in a meeting at the moment though she is aware of your e-mail and will give you an answer after the meeting.

Similar Threads

  1. Please check my paragraph writing
    By fahimaamir in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: 28-Mar-2008, 07:14
  2. Check my letter writing please.
    By jomo27 in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 9
    Last Post: 04-Mar-2008, 10:06
  3. another writing to check
    By brahimsoft in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 28-Aug-2006, 02:27
  4. Replies: 2
    Last Post: 30-Jul-2006, 19:53
  5. News Writing (Please check for errors)
    By Kenneth in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 05-Jun-2006, 01:18

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •