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    #1

    Please check it.

    1. Everything about business.

    2. Business Life.

    3. This is a blog which I made for a lounge or place to share, discuss and learn more about business. I'll post everything that's related to business. I'm hoping this blog might have help you in real life. Please post some comments or suggestions or viceversa.


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    #2

    Re: Please check it.

    (Not a teacher)

    Hello Jomo,

    I'm uncertain as to how 1 and 2 relate to the blog. Are they titles? In 3, I'd suggest putting the article "a" in front of "place." Remove "have" from in front of "help." The expression "or viceversa" doesn't really add anything useful to the sentence so I would recommend deleting it.

    May this be of help,

    G.F.

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    #3

    Re: Please check it.

    1st and 2nd are titles.

    The last one is the content.

    Thanks anyway!


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    Re: Please check it.

    Quote Originally Posted by jomo27 View Post
    1. Everything about business.

    2. Business Life.

    3. This is a blog which I made for a lounge or place as somewhere to share, discuss and learn more about business. I'll post everything I meet/find that's related to business. I'm hoping this blog will help you in real life. Please post your comments or suggestions.
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