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    Default Indian Moon Mission>>Kinldy check grammar..

    Today I am feeling a very proud Indian, it is a day when Indian tricolor landed on the moon, making India the only sixth country in the world. Many across the globe have criticized the Indian Moon Mission, saying that the countryís half population is below the poverty line, so rather then eradicating the problems which they have been facing here on earth, they are leap forwarding to moon by pumping lots of fund into it, which could have been used for other developments. Some says that the US and other countries had reached the moon decades ago, so itís not a really great achievement. But itís a benchmark for Indian Space Agency, which has sent the ripples across the Globe of its excellence.

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    Default Re: Indian Moon Mission>>Kinldy check grammar..

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    Today I feel very proud to be (an) Indian. It is a day when the Indian tricolor landed on the moon, making India only the 6th country in the world to accomplish that feat. Many across the globe have criticized the Indian moon mission. Noting that half the country's population lives below the poverty line, critics contend that the extensive funding for the space program could be better used for dealing with India's problems here on earth, rather than unnecessarily accelerating its moon landing timetable. Some say that the U.S. and other countries reached the moon decades ago, so this isn't really a great achievement. However, as a result of this accomplishment, the excellence of the Indian Space Agency is known across the globe.
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    Default Re: Indian Moon Mission>>Kinldy check grammar..

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    saying that the country’s half population is below the poverty line,
    (one addition to Greg's changes)

    saying that half of the country's population lives below the poverty line

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