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    mikko4 is offline Junior Member
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    Default Can you please look at these lyrics? thx

    Just another dream of mine
    Whole my life I was waiting for
    the damned moment,
    That would let me live forever
    But the moment didn’t come and never will

    All my dreams have disappeared
    But that’s what life is about
    Your dreams may never come true
    So you’d better start living and stop dreaming
    Ch1:
    Now I don’t dream any more.
    I live for today.
    I share what I’ve learned
    I enjoy and sing
    I say what I want to say
    And I love everyone

    Age of tales is over
    What you need is a push in your face
    The push that’ll make you see
    It is never to late to change your life

    Finally open your eyes and take a look
    The truth lies in front of you
    God cannot help you
    You’re on your own
    Ch2:
    Now I see my reason to live.
    From now on
    I take a risk,
    I drink,
    I swear
    And I never regret

    Just want to know whether there are some words that you would change. and please feel free to write your personal opinion on this song.
    This is the first time I've tried to write lyrics in english. I knnow it's not very original and breathtaking but so far it's the best that I can do.

    Thank you all very much.

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    Default Re: Can you please look at these lyrics? thx

    Quote Originally Posted by mikko4 View Post
    Just another dream of mine
    The Whole of my life I was waiting for
    the damned moment,
    That would let me live forever
    But the moment didnít come and never will

    All my dreams have disappeared
    But thatís what life is about
    Your dreams may never come true
    So youíd better start living and stop dreaming
    Ch1:
    Now I donít dream any more.
    I live for today.
    I share what Iíve learned
    I enjoy and sing
    I say what I want to say
    And I love everyone

    The Age of tales is over
    What you need is a push in your face [?]
    The push thatíll make you see
    It is never too late to change your life

    Finally open your eyes and take a look
    The truth lies in front of you
    God cannot help you
    Youíre on your own
    Ch2:
    Now I see my reason to live.
    From now on
    I take a risk,
    I drink,
    I swear
    And I never regret

    Just want to know whether there are some words that you would change. and please feel free to write your personal opinion on this song.
    This is the first time I've tried to write lyrics in english. I knnow it's not very original and breathtaking but so far it's the best that I can do.

    Thank you all very much.
    It's not bad. It's nice to see an original poem/song on the site, AND one that doesn't suck up to a god, or make you start dry wretching.

    What does "a push in the face" mean to you? I'm not sure what it's meant to do; it's not an English idiom.

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    Thumbs up Re: Can you please look at these lyrics? thx

    u have a smart vision as wellas feeling
    go a head

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    Default Re: Can you please look at these lyrics? thx

    by "push in your face" I mean something like a hit in a face. when someone hits you in your face. I dont know what a noun should be ?(push, hit or punch ?)

    thanks

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    Default Re: Can you please look at these lyrics? thx

    Quote Originally Posted by mikko4 View Post
    by "push in your face" I mean something like a hit in a face. when someone hits you in your face. I dont know what a noun should be ?(push, hit or punch ?)

    thanks
    punch

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    Default Re: Can you please look at these lyrics? thx

    OK thanks

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