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    Default Can anyone check my piece of writing, thanks!

    "I was being misleaded by your info, in which you said you are a little shy and interverted, so I was trying to find a job that may fit to your personality. Well, you look like a lawyer now...but more like a nurse."

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    Default Re: Can anyone check my piece of writing, thanks!

    Quote Originally Posted by skymoon View Post
    "I have been misled [lead, led, led] by your info, in which you said you were a little shy and introverted, so I was trying to find a job that may suit your personality. Well, you look like a lawyer now...but more like a nurse."

    I'm not sure what you mean by someone who looks like a lawyer but more like a nurse. I can't think of two more opposing (stereotypical) personality types.



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