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    Could anybody urgently help me proofread the following sentences?

    Hello everybody!!! Could anybdody here urgently help me proofread the following sentences?

    1) To green the slopes in ABC park./Greening improvement on the slopes of ABC park.(Carry out green work on slopes in the park)
    2) To increase the number of green areas on slopes./To further expand the green areas of slopes.
    3) To reduce soil erosion./To prevent soils from being eroded.
    4) There are numerous deep slopes which have never turned to be green/have limited green areas and are confronted by soil erosion in ABC park.

    Thany you in advance!!!

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    Re: Could anybody urgently help me proofread the following sentences?

    Hi.
    None of these are sentences.

    I'm not sure if you're using the word "slopes" correctly. Do you mean "the side of hills or mountains"? What do you mean, exactly?

    Are you using the verb "to green" to mean "to make more environmentally sustainable" or "to plant grass"?

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