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    piggy386 is offline Junior Member
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    The description of the crescent moon

    The crescent moon featured shimmering iridescent light with a blanket of shining stars.

    Does this sound alright and grammatically correct?
    If not, any suggestion on how should I describe the crescent moon?

    Please advise. Thanks.

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    Re: The description of the crescent moon

    'The crescent moon was a shimmering iridescent light on a blanket of shining stars.'

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    Re: The description of the crescent moon

    Quote Originally Posted by Mister Micawber
    'The crescent moon was a shimmering iridescent light on a blanket of shining stars.'
    Thanks for the suggetion

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