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    Talking I need a grammar check for my "about me" entry.

    Hello! My real name is Ellen. Paprika is just a pretend persona that I use to protect my real identity and keep privacy. Iím a Data Entry Operator, working virtually for a private company located in India. I am also into many Paid-To-Click (PTC) sites. PTC is a new medium for earning extra cash online. I've been a member for a month now and have been burned some PTCs, but I'm still keeping my faith and continue my quest for finding the best Paid-To-Click website.

    Thanks for helping me out!
    -len

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    Default Re: I need a grammar check for my "about me" entry.

    I've been a member for a month now and have been burned by ?some PTCs, but I'm still keeping my faith and continue my quest for finding the best Paid-To-Click website.

    to be burned means to be robbed or duped. Is that what you mean?

    In any case, leave that sentence out.

    Consider:

    I've been a member for a month now and have had many kinds of experiences with various PTCs and I am continuing my quest for finding the best Paid-To-Click website.

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    Thumbs up Re: I need a grammar check for my "about me" entry.

    Hey, I think your suggestion is much better. Thank you so much!

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