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    Default Could you correct my essay please?

    Thank you so much!
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    Default Re: Could you correct my essay please?

    Make paragraphs. Also, make sure every sentence has a verb.
    Check for spelling mistakes.

    What is the topic of your essay?


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    Rewrite your essay one paragraph at a time. Then post it here - one paragraph at a time.


    Reread it and then rewrite it. Assume it needs improvement. Don't be afraid to throw things out.



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    Default Re: Could you correct my essay please?

    Sorry but I can't post it here, otherwise anyone could find it through google..
    Thank's

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