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    Please correct the mistakes.

    Whoever you are, thanks!


    1. Cars are made for transportation not for showing off.

    2. People who always believe in fate will not success.

    3. Networking and innovation are two good elements in business.

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    Re: Please correct the mistakes.

    Quote Originally Posted by jomo27 View Post
    Whoever you are, thanks!


    1. Cars are made for transportation, not for showing off.

    2. People who always believe in fate will not success. success= noun ; succeed = verb - which do you think should be here?

    3. Networking and innovation are two good elements in business.
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