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    Default Could you refine this sentence for me?

    Hi, gays. I has write a sentence. I think maybe there is some wrong with the it. Could you understant it? If not, could you polish it for me?
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    His faith is to try to apply polymer science to real world. When I saw he contributing to the progress of technology in society and boosting its profit margin of manufacturer, I realized chemistry would only become useful when its application could be realized.

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    Default Re: Could you refine this sentence for me?

    How about:
    When I saw him contribute to the progress of technology in society and boost manufacturers' profit margins, I realized chemistry would only become useful when its application could be realized. (this is unclear to me- what do you want to say here?)

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