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  1. Anonymous
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    Is this title correct?

    Hi, I'm writing a report and I need to know if my report title is correct:

    Implementation of Paperless Offices by Using Intranet

    Thanks!

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    Re: Is this title correct?

    It's hard to judge a title that is disconnected from the text, but don't you mean "by using the Internet"?

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    Implementation of Paperless Offices by Using Intranets

    I prefer this.

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    Re: Is this title correct?

    That's probably what she had in mind.

    8)

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    Re: Is this title correct?

    I'd go for Tdol's suggestion.

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    How about 'Implementation of Paperless offices through Intranets??

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    Quote Originally Posted by tdol
    How about 'Implementation of Paperless offices through Intranets??
    These are a good suggestions. Thanks TDOL!

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    You could also puch the boat out and go for something like 'Intranet based implementation of paperless offices.'

    PS- how about 'paper free'?

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