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    Default More sophisticated expressions

    I'm writing an essay and I would like to see if anyone in here could make the following underlined words/phrases or sentences a bit more sophisticated.

    1-The US Constitution was crafted .
    2-The founders of the US made it a point to give press enough protection to carry out its essential role.
    3- to get enough reliable information.
    4- What democracy can the US celebrate if it is one (democracy) derived from the public's ignorance? Please help me with this
    5-The media’s informative role is not enough by itself, for the media have also to provide a forum for/of discusson.

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    Default Re: More sophisticated expressions

    Quote Originally Posted by aous02 View Post
    I'm writing an essay and I would like to see if anyone in here could make the following underlined words/phrases or sentences a bit more sophisticated.

    1-The US Constitution was crafted . drafted
    2-The founders of the US made it a point to give the press enough protection to carry out its essential role.
    3- to get enough reliable information.
    4- What democracy can the US celebrate if it is one (democracy) derived from the public's ignorance? Please help me with this
    5-The media’s informative role is not enough by itself, for the media have also to provide a forum for
    /of discussion.
    ..

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