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    Dear Mr. ..,

    The Quality Control Department has approved 100 Grams of Sodium Chloride from Changzhou Pharmaceutical Factory, China submitted through Gudia (Pvt) Limited, Karachi vide Q.C.R # 7327 & Q.A.R # BS08-0100 on 16.12.08.

    You are requested to please manufacture a small batch to conduct a stability test before we are able to go into regular import.

    Thank you for your attention to this request


    Regards,
    Shanz

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    Default Re: this is an inter-deptt. email

    Hello,

    This email is hard to understand, especially the first part. I made slight adjustments as follows:


    Dear Mr. ..,

    The quality-control department has approved 100 grams of sodium chloride from Changzhou Pharmaceutical Factory, China, submitted through Gudia (Pvt) Limited, Karachi vide Q.C.R #7327 and Q.A.R #BS08-0100 on December 16, 2008.

    You are requested to manufacture a small batch in order to conduct a stability test before we are able to import more.

    Thank you for your attention to this matter.

    Regards,
    Shanz


    -gord_l

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    Thank you so much gord_l

    Have a nice time!

    Best regards,
    Shanz

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