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    1. Peace marches, candlelight vigils, blaming Government and inefficiency of bureaucracy, under equipped-security forces, shouting slogans - these all are just the reaction to the terrorist acts, but wherever is the action?

    2. Government should not just talk about the measures it will take, as it had been seen many times in the past that all the action had just been on paper, it was never materialized. Hope this time the government is serious and would take all the necessary action it requires to alleviate fear from the minds of the common people.

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    Exclamation Re: please check for grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    1. Peace marches, candlelight vigils, blaming Government and the inefficient (cy of) bureaucracy, under equipped-security forces, shouting slogans - all these are just (the) reactions to the terrorist acts, but where (ver) is the action?

    2. Government should not just talk about the measures it will take, as it
    has/had been seen many times in the past with (that) all the action having been (had) just confined (on) to paper, and nothing (it was never) materialized. Hope this time the government is serious and would take all the necessary and appropriate action (it requires) to alleviate fear from the minds of the common people.
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