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    Talking return your kindness one day.

    Hello~ Would you help me with saying this naturally please?


    A: I donít know how to thanks you. I owed you a lot.
    ⓐ I will return your kindness one day.
    ⓑ I will owe you one someday.

    B: Please, donít say that. I did nothing. If you keep saying,
    ⓐ I feel shame myself.
    ⓑ Iím shy myself

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    Re: return your kindness one day.

    A: I don’t know how to thanks you. I owed you a lot.
    ⓐ I will return your kindness one day.
    ⓑ I will owe you one someday.


    It's "to thank you" (not "to thanks you"); and "I owe you..." not "I owed you...."
    If you wish to continue your thanks, you might say option ⓐ above, but not ⓑ, as you already owe them "one" now (so, don't use the future tense "I will owe...").

    B: Please, don’t say that. I did nothing. If you keep saying,
    ⓐ I feel shame myself.
    ⓑ I’m shy myself

    Here, I think you might simply stop after the "I did nothing" statement. If you wish to continue for emphasis, then the more natural thing would be to say, "You embarass me!"

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    Re: return your kindness one day.

    For the first one, one possibility:
    I don't know how to thank you. I owe you a lot. I hope to repay your kindness one day.
    You could also say:
    Thank you very much. I owe you one.

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