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    A University is planing to develop One research center out of these two (Business Or Agricultural) in your country, Which one do you recommend, and why?

    Different kinds of research program run by the universities provide benefits to community and society, as my community is more dependent on an agriculture so i prefer the University to run the Agricultural research center rather than Business. Though, research on business helps community to flourish economically but it depends on a skill and occupation of people. In following paragraph I will analyze why I prefer the University to run Agricultural research center rather than Business.

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    Default Re: Please Check my Paragraph, looking for improvement.

    Quote Originally Posted by Sun751 View Post
    A University is planing to develop One research center out of these two (Business Or Agricultural) in your country, Which one do you recommend, and why?

    Different kinds of research program run by the universities provide benefits to community and society, as my community is more dependent on an agriculture so i prefer the University to run the Agricultural research center rather than Business. Though, research on business helps community to flourish economically but it depends on a skill and occupation of people. In following paragraph I will explain why I prefer the University to run Agricultural research center rather than Business.
    Make more sentences. Simplify.


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