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    hello to every body

    i want from you to correct my praghraph ( spelling - grammar- meaning) please and i will be grateful




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    My name is *********. I am nineteen years old. I am from Riyadh, Saudi Arabia. I study English language and literature in The College of Art. I live with my family and I have two sisters and two brothers. My personality is helpful, calm and ambitious. Also I am serious and funny. For example, when I am inside studying class, I listen to the teacher and never chat with my friend. On the other hand, when I go to the party, I like joking and laughing. I am interested in acquiring new languages. I can speak beside the mother language, which is Arabic, English and Spanish. I have a lot of wishes and dreams to achieve in the future. On of them is that I want to be translator.



    thank you

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    Default Re: correct my pragraph please

    Hi
    wlecome :)
    I am interested in acquiring a new languages.
    My personality is helpful, calm and ambitious.
    I think there is a mistake here :(

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    My name is *********. I am nineteen years old. I am from Riyadh, Saudi Arabia. I study English language and literature in The College of Art. I live with my family and I have two sisters and two brothers. My personality is helpful, calm and ambitious. Also I am serious and funny. For example, when I am in class studying , I listen to the teacher and never chat with my friend. On the other hand, when I go to a party I like joking and laughing. I am interested in acquiring new languages. I can speak English and Spanish besides my mother language which is Arabic. I have a lot of wishes and dreams to achieve in the future. One of them is that I want to be translator.

    This is good.

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    Default Re: correct my pragraph please

    thank you lot

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    Default Re: correct my pragraph please

    I tried to fix my post, but it seems that the more I did the worse it got. (So I deleted it.) Anyhow, it should be: I study English. (Not: I study English language.) (The word English means the English language.)




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