Not bad. There's really nothing wrong with it as it is (except for one 'and' too many in the last sentence, which I'm sure is just a typo).
I can't help but meddle, though!
In accordance with B's request, ZBM's official website is to be closed down. Thanks to everyone who has visited it over the last five years.
Please continue to support our dear friend B and his club P.
M, site webmaster.
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