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    I am appearing for English exam soon so I am trying to write few Essay Below there is a question and the Introduction part of my essay please let me know that if my Introduction is appropriate???


    Some people think its important to use leisure time for activities that improve mind other thinks it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.what do u think?

    In general leisure time is important for the human being to recover from stresses of work and every day life.Personally, I prefer to use leisure time by doing different activities, as i think its suite me better. However what we do with our leisure time is up to us and no one can say that any particular activities is better.

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    Some people think it is important to use their leisure time for self-improvement. Others prefer to use their leisure time for recreation.



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    Try:
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    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    Try:
    Please tell me what you think.
    In general leisure time is important for the human being to recover from stresses of work and every day life.Personally, I prefer to use leisure time by doing recreational activities, as i think its suite me better. However what we do with our leisure time is up to us and no one can say that any particular activities is better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sun751 View Post
    In general leisure time is important for the human being to recover from stresses of work and every day life.Personally, I prefer to use leisure time by doing recreational activities, as i think its suite me better. However what we do with our leisure time is up to us and no one can say that any particular activities is better.
    You don't have enough time to study for your exam. But for future reference, forget about saying Personally, I prefer. Say, simply, I prefer. But that is something you don't want to do if you want to use as many words as possible for whatever reason. (There are a few.)



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