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    Some people help their community directly while others help through national and international organizations. Discuss both ways and give your opinion.

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    Every one have some responsibility towards their community, as they born, learn how to live a life and become a successful person. People do different social activities to help uplift their society. In further paragraph i am going to analyze about this issue as some help their community directly whereas others do it through different well fair organization.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sun751 View Post
    [Question]
    Some people help their community directly while others help through national and international organizations. Discuss both ways and give your opinion.

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    Every one Everyone have has some responsibility towards their community, as they born??, learn how to live a life and become a successful person. People do different social activities to help uplift (to oil the wheels of) their society. In further the following paragraph i I am going to analyze about this issue as some help their community directly whereas others do it through different well fair organization.

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    Sun751, I suggest that you give up on analyze. Discuss. Explain. Give your opinion.


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    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    Sun751, I suggest that you give up on analyze. Discuss. Explain. Give your opinion.

    [Question]
    Some people help their community directly while others help through national and international organizations. Discuss both ways and give your opinion.

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    Everyone has some responsibility towards their community, As they learn how to leave their life and get success on whatever they do. People do different social activities to oil the wheels of their society. Individual prefer their own way to contribute toward their community, In the following paragraph i am going to discuss more about peoples preferences how to contribute their society.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sun751 View Post
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    Everyone has some responsibility towards their community. As they learn how to live their lives and become successful at what they do. (What?)People engage in various social activities to oil the wheels of their society. Individuals prefer their own way to contribute toward their community, In the following paragraph i am going to discuss more about people's preferences on how to contribute to their society.

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