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    can anyone respond

    ok so im writing an essay and im basically comparing myself to a bird so i wanted to know what is a better way to refrase this sentence...
    i was thinking maybe..
    3 diffrent types of feathers grow on my body that represent my strengths, skills, family and friends and how team oriented i am
    or..
    i have diffrent types of feathers that symbolizes diffrent parts of my life; the flight feather, the contour feather, and the down feather...(and then open up a new paragraph as to how each one represents diffrent parts of my life)

    i jus need a little help refrasing it a bit if anyone could help that would be nice that you

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    Re: can anyone respond

    I have diffrent types of feathers, each kind symbolizing a different part of my life; the flight feather, the contour feather, and the down feather.

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    Be sure to spell-check and capitalize where needed!

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    Re: can anyone respond

    Quote Originally Posted by susiedqq View Post
    I have diffErent types of feathers, each kind symbolizing a different part of my life; the flight feather, the contour feather, and the down feather.

    ***************

    Be sure to spell-check and capitalize where needed!
    What's that?

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    Re: can anyone respond

    Which species do you imagine yourself to be?

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