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    Hi .
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    Could you pleas help my to correct my paragaph ?? I f there are any splling , grammar & any things wrong..



    My Enjoyment Vacation
    I really enjoy in my last vacation. I always have been waiting vacations. The first reason is that I traveled in vacation to tow countries. I visited the most beautiful place in that country. Moreover, I saw the differences between countries, cultures, languages and nations. Another reason is that I attended lots of parties and I also went for visitations. If any one asked me to come for any party I can simply say," O.k I am coming".I also in last vacation I visited lots of my friends and stayed with them for a long time. Furthermore, I visited my relatives and slept in their home. The most important reason is that I have had lots of free time. In my free time I did whatever I want to did it. For examples, I went for shopping and beach with my friends. In addition, I was surfing the internet any time and chatting with my friends on the messenger. I read many novels , cooking book and English book. In conclusion, I enjoy in every second in my last vacation. I really like vacation time.
    what do you think the best title

    My Enjoyment Vacation OR My lovely Vacation??
    Thank you

    Pleas correct it as soon as possible


    Last edited by Miss dode; 08-Jan-2009 at 10:25.

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    Up Up
    Help plzzzz

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    Come on
    plz correct it I need it .....

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    Hi .
    How are you ?
    Could you pleas help my to correct my paragaph ?? I f there are any splling , grammar & any things wrong..



    My Enjoyment Vacation
    I really enjoy in my last vacation. I always have been waiting vacations. The first reason is that I traveled in vacation to tow countries. I visited the most beautiful place in that country. Moreover, I saw the differences between countries, cultures, languages and nations. Another reason is that I attended lots of parties and I also went for visitations. If any one asked me to come for any party I can simply say," O.k I am coming".I also in last vacation I visited lots of my friends and stayed with them for a long time. Furthermore, I visited my relatives and slept in their home. The most important reason is that I have had lots of free time. In my free time I did whatever I want to did it. For examples, I went for shopping and beach with my friends. In addition, I was surfing the internet any time and chatting with my friends on the messenger. I read many novels , cooking book and English book. In conclusion, I enjoy in every second in my last vacation. I really like vacation time.
    what do you think the best title

    My Enjoyment Vacation OR My lovely Vacation??
    Thank you

    Pleas correct it as soon as possible

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    hello~~~how are you~~~


    i have a very big problem with my essay
    the topic of my essay was 'compare and contrast the language used in various text types'
    i didn't know how to start it.
    actually i didn't knew the meaning of the language used in various text types
    but i have tried to write the first paragraph
    was it right ??
    or something........

    Books, newspapers, advertisements and other readings let us know a lot of news, knowledge, etc. All of them would not be written in the same way that all used in the same language. For example, normally most of newspaper articles were wrote in a formal language and almost all narrative books used informal language. Various text types have different kinds of language used in, such as informative, formal, informal, positives and so on. Some of them were similar. Some of them were not.

    thanks for your helping~~~

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    Quote Originally Posted by Miss dode View Post




    My Enjoyable Vacation


    I really enjoyed in my last vacation. I always have been waiting vacations. I recently traveled to two countries, visiting the most beautiful places in those countries.
    Reduce the size of the font in your posts. (Try two, three or four.)


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    Say:
    I went shopping, and I went to the beach.


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