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    Default sentences about Christmas (4)

    Hi, I' d like to know if the sentennces are ok. Please say if they are acceptable before giving suggestions to say things in a better way, so I can understand where I am totally wrong


    1)my granny cooked a lot of beautiful and very good things

    2)The most spectacular thing was the turkey

    3) The turkey was big and incredible

    4) On Christmas night I was at granny's

    5) for my next Christmas I have a huge dream: to go to orlando, florida, with my family

    6)Last uear for Christmas I was at hme will all my family: there was my grandmother, too.

    7) This year Christmas wasn't so beautiful because my granpa is dead. But Father Christmas gave me a wonderful gift: my sister gave birth Nicolas on 21th December

    8)in the future christmas will be more beautiful: Nicholas will grow and I will play with him

    9)My best days in the Christmas holidays were Christmas and New year's day


    10)On new year's day at midnight I exploded a lot of artificial fires

    11) I played play ststion games with my brother but I lost

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    Default Re: sentences about Christmas (4)

    Quote Originally Posted by ripley View Post


    1)My granny cooked a lot of beautiful and very good things.

    2)The most spectacular thing was the turkey.

    3) The turkey was big and incredible incredible and big.

    410 Grammar: Adjective Order

    4) On Christmas night I was at granny's.

    5) for my next Christmas I have a huge dream: to go to Orlando, Florida, with my family.

    6)Last year for Christmas I was at home willth all my family. there was My grandmother was there, too.

    7) This year's Christmas wasn't so beautiful because my granpa is dead died. But Father Christmas gave me a wonderful gift: mMy sister gave birth to Nicolas on 21th December.

    8) In the future cChristmas will be more beautiful: Nicholas will grow up/older and I will play with him.

    9)My best days in the Christmas holidays were Christmas and New Year's Day.


    10)On new year's day at midnight I exploded a lot of artificial fires sent a lot of fireworks aloft.

    11) I played play-station games with my brother but I lost

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    Default Re: sentences about christmas c

    Quote Originally Posted by ripley View Post

    1)My granny cooked a lot of beautiful and very good things though we would probably say "things to eat" or "dishes".

    2)The most spectacular thing was the turkey

    3) The turkey was big and incredible huge

    4) On Christmas night I was at granny's

    5) For my next Christmas I have a huge dream: to go to Orlando, Florida, with my family

    6)Last year for Christmas I was at home with all my family, including grandmother.

    7) This year Christmas wasn't so beautiful because my granpa is dead. But Father Christmas gave me a wonderful gift: my sister gave birth to Nicolas on 21st December

    8)In the future Christmas will be more beautiful: Nicholas will grow and I will play with him

    9)My best days in the Christmas holidays were Christmas Day and New year's Day


    10)On New Year's Eve at midnight I set off a lot of fireworks

    11) I played Playstation games with my brother but I lost
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