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    #1

    Correct my grammer in the letter

    Hi,

    please correct my letter...


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    My name is Seshu.

    Mr.John has asked me contact you regarding a job position that you have. I have been working with XYZ company since 2000.

    I work on open systems side (web and windows application development).

    If possible, please let me know your contact number so that I can call and discuss about the job requirement.

    You can even reply to this email along with all the details.

    I look forward to hearing from you.

    Best Regards,


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    #2

    Re: Correct my grammer in the letter

    hi,

    any one?

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    #3

    Exclamation Re: Correct my grammar in the letter

    Quote Originally Posted by netpicker9 View Post
    Hi,

    please correct my letter...


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    Dear netpicker9
    First of all it is grammar not grammer
    The following are the corrections that are necessary

    My name is Seshu,

    Mr.John has asked me to contact you regarding a job position that you have. I have been working with XYZ company since 2000.

    I work on open systems side (web and windows application development).

    If possible, please let me know your contact number so that I can call and discuss about the job requirement.

    You can even reply to this email along with all the details.

    I look forward to hearing from you.

    Best Regards,

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    #4

    Re: Correct my grammer in the letter

    job/position are the same, use only one. Either one is acceptable.

    discuss about is incorrect, use disscuss the job requirements.

    I am not a teacher.

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