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    learnerofenglish is offline Newbie
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    Please help me with my resume

    Hello,

    I would like to send my resume to Apple for which I'm really keen to work so I'd prefer not mess up my resume.

    Could you check if there are mistakes of grammar or expression in the first paragraph please ?

    Thank you
    Regards,

    Resume_Apple - Copie.doc

    Edit: there is an error in the title, it's a cover letter not a resume

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    English-coach is offline Member
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    Smile Re: Please help me with my resume

    I went over your cover letter and have attached it here. I wrote my changes in Bold

    Just remember to be direct, specific and focus on the job. Tell them why you are the best person for the job. Convince them. :)

    Make them think they HAVE to call you. They would be crasy not to! :)

    Hope that helps.
    Diana
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