I went over your cover letter and have attached it here. I wrote my changes in Bold
Just remember to be direct, specific and focus on the job. Tell them why you are the best person for the job. Convince them. :)
Make them think they HAVE to call you. They would be crasy not to! :)
Hope that helps.
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