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    hello dears

    it is my first time here

    and I want to ask u something

    I want an article which contain of cohesive ties like rferences, substitution , ellipses , lexical ties , conjuction and so on

    it is very important for me , I realy need it

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    #2

    Re: help me please

    Quote Originally Posted by prettygirl^^ View Post
    hello dears


    it is my first time here

    and I want to ask u something

    I want an article which contain of cohesive ties like rferences, substitution , ellipses , lexical ties , conjuction and so on


    it is very important for me , I realy need it
    The idea of this website is to HELP you, not to do the work for you. So, write what you think it should be, and then ask for help. There will be people quite willing to help you finish the article properly.


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    #3

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    The idea of this website is to HELP you


    I know that

    I didn't ask anyone to do the work for me as u said

    I just want an article which contain cohisive ties and I will analyze it by myself !


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    #4

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    Quote Originally Posted by prettygirl^^ View Post

    I know that

    I didn't ask anyone to do the work for me as u said

    I just want an article which contain cohisive ties and I will analyze it by myself !
    I am still confused.................. are you not writing the article? If not, does that mean that you are to take an existing, published article and analyse it?

    In my opinion, you need to find the article, analyse it to the best of your ability, then you post your analysis and the original article here for members to critique/correct your work.


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    #5

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    I don't have to write the article !

    I just have to find any article which contain cohesive ties and analyse it .

    I tryied to find suitable and good article b4 coming here and ask for help , but I didnt find what I want , that's all !




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    #6

    Re: help me please

    Hey pretty lazy girl, find any article, whether you find what you want or not, and try to analyse it! Gotta start somewhere! No time like the present!


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    anyone pls. correct my sentence or grammar thanks

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