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    1.I took seven days to complete this piece of work, I am sure if you would have been in my place, you would have taken around 15 days.orI had completed this piece of book in seven days. I am sure if you would have been in my place, you would have taken around 15 days.2.How much pension would be sufficient for you post-retirement? It is not a guess game. To secure your old age, to be tension free at that point of time, you need a perfect plan to suit your needs.3.I reached here on time but they havenít come yet.OrI reached here on time but they havenít came yet.

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    Default Re: Kindly correct my contents......

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    1.I took seven days to complete this piece of work, I am sure if you would have been in my place, you would have taken around 15 days.orI had completed this piece of book in seven days. I am sure if you would have been in my place, you would have taken around 15 days.2.How much pension would be sufficient for you post-retirement? It is not a guess game. To secure your old age, to be tension free at that point of time, you need a perfect plan to suit your needs.3.I reached here on time but they havenít come yet.OrI reached here on time but they havenít came yet.
    1.I took seven days to complete this piece of work, I am sure if you had been in my place, it would have taken you around 15 days.

    2.How much pension would be sufficient for you post-retirement? It is not a guessing game. To secure your old age, to be tension free at that point of time, you need a perfect plan to suit your needs.

    3.I reached here on time but they havenít come yet.

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