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    please check my letter.... Thanks

    January 21, 2009

    ABC Co. Ltd.,
    Karachi.



    Attn. Mr. Xyz


    Subject: Supply of EGC # 1 Contract # 365/08-09 & PO # 7534, Qty. 968,000 Pcs.

    We have received 968,000 Empty Gelatine Capsules of size # 1 against said contract & received following serious complaints from our Production Department:

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    You are requested to depute your representative to visit our factory on priority basis as we can not use balance Empty Gelatine Capsules anymore with / due to high rate of rejection.

    Samples are enclosed for your reference.


    Best regards,
    Shanz

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    Exclamation Re: please check my letter.... Thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by shanz View Post
    January 21, 2009





    Attn. Mr. Xyz


    Subject: Supply of EGC # 1, Contract # 365/08-09 & PO # 7534, Qty. 968,000 Pcs.

    We have received 968,000 Empty Gelatine Capsules of size # 1 against the aforesaid contract & received following complaints of serious nature from our Production Department:
    • ..
    • ..
    • ..
    • ..

    You are requested to depute your representative to visit our factory on priority basis as we can not use balance Empty Gelatine Capsules anymore (with /) due to high rate of rejection.

    A few samples are enclosed for your reference.


    Best regards,
    Shanz

    skp

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    Re: please check my letter.... Thanks

    Thank you so much for your corrections

    Best regards,
    Shanz

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