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    Hi, could you check my letter? Thanks

    Dear Anne and Dave Prendergast,

    I知 writing with regard to your advertisement for working on HOLIDAY FARM and practice my English.
    I am not a native English speaker, even though I have been studying it for ten years at school and I need to practice my speaking, so I hope this will be the chance to do it.
    I知 18 years old and I attend High School Specialising in classical subjects. I usually work every summer and I got used to hard work: two years ago I worked for three months as waiter in a restaurant and last year as a shopping assistant.
    I would like to know a piece of information about the job. I would prefer to choose the working hours, is it possible? How much is the pay? Is the work really hard?
    I hope the accommodation is good but you did not write on the advertisement if it is a single or double room.
    Furthermore I am interested in knowing if the lessons are private or no, and if the teacher is an English native speaker.

    Yours Sincerely

    Luca

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tellthetruth View Post
    I知 writing with regard to your advertisement for working on HOLIDAY FARM and practice my English.
    I知 writing with regard to your advertisement for employment at Holiday Farm.
    Quote Originally Posted by Tellthetruth View Post
    I am not a native English speaker, even though I have been studying it for ten years at school and I need to practice my speaking, so I hope this will be the chance to do it.
    I am not a native English speaker, and even though I have been studying English for ten years at school I need to practice my speaking skills. I hope this will be a chance to do so.

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    Thanks a lot!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tellthetruth View Post
    I知 18 years old and I attend High School Specialising in classical subjects. I usually work every summer and I got used to hard work: two years ago I worked for three months as waiter in a restaurant and last year as a shopping assistant.
    I知 18 years old and I attend a high school specializing in classical subjects. I usually work every summer and I got used to hard work. Two years ago I worked for three months as waiter in a restaurant, and last year I worked as a shopping assistant.
    Quote Originally Posted by Tellthetruth View Post
    I would like to know a piece of information about the job. I would prefer to choose the working hours, is it possible? How much is the pay? Is the work really hard?
    I need to know a couple of things about the job. I would prefer to choose the working hours. Is that possible? How much is the pay? Is the work really hard?
    Quote Originally Posted by Tellthetruth View Post
    I hope the accommodation is good but you did not write on the advertisement if it is a single or double room.
    I hope the accommodations are good, but you did not say in the advertisement if the room is a single or a double.
    Quote Originally Posted by Tellthetruth View Post
    Furthermore I am interested in knowing if the lessons are private or no, and if the teacher is an English native speaker.
    Furthermore, I am interested in knowing if the lessons are private or not and if the teacher is an English native speaker.
    What do you think?


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