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    Default If anyone want to revise my thesis, I can pay

    I've a thesis, part of which is need to improve English. I've just want some revise on the grammar not content.

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    Default Re: If anyone want to revise my thesis, I can pay

    Quote Originally Posted by tibethill View Post
    I've a thesis, part of which is need to improve English. I've just want some revise on the grammar not content.

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    Why not post a paragraph at a time for people to consider.

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    Default Re: If anyone want to revise my thesis, I can pay

    Quote Originally Posted by tibethill View Post
    I've a thesis, part of which is need to improve English. I've just want some revise on the grammar not content.
    I've written a thesis, and I need somebody to correct the grammar mistakes.
    OK!



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    Default Re: If anyone want to revise my thesis, I can pay

    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    I've written a thesis, and I need somebody to correct the grammar mistakes.
    OK!


    Excuse me. Is the following sentence okay?

    I've written a thesis, and I would like to pay someone who can proofread it.


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    Default Re: If anyone want to revise my thesis, I can pay

    Quote Originally Posted by thedaffodils View Post
    Excuse me. Is the following sentence okay?

    I've written a thesis, and I would like to pay someone who can proofread it.

    Try:

    I've written a thesis, and I would like to pay someone to proofread it.

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    Default Re: If anyone want to revise my thesis, I can pay

    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    Try:

    I've written a thesis, and I would like to pay someone to proofread it.

    Thank you for your correction, BonBee.

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