im writing a ten page research paper on the crusades and i was wondering how this thesis statement sounds
During the Medieval Crusades, the christian crusaders committed many unjustifiable attacks
against religious parties to help supply their Holy War.
hasnt been turned in yet
well what can be done to it to make it better i have like no idea
ok i redid it just a bit let me know if its any better or what not
During the Medieval Crusades, the christian crusaders had committed many unjustifiable attacks
against relgious parties to help supply their Holy War, and in the end was a huge reason why
the Greek Church of Byzantium and the Roman Church of the West were never reunited.