im writing a ten page research paper on the crusades and i was wondering how this thesis statement sounds
During the Medieval Crusades, the christian crusaders committed many unjustifiable attacks against religious parties to help supply their Holy War.
hasnt been turned in yet
ok i redid it just a bit let me knwo what you think of it
During the Medieval Crusades, the christian crusaders had committed many unjustifiable attacks
against relgious parties to help supply their Holy War, and in the end was a huge reason why
the Greek Church of Byzantium and the Roman Church of the West were never reunited.