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    Thanatos058 is offline Newbie
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    Thesis Statement help needed

    im writing a ten page research paper on the crusades and i was wondering how this thesis statement sounds

    During the Medieval Crusades, the christian crusaders committed many unjustifiable attacks against religious parties to help supply their Holy War.

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    Re: Thesis Statement help needed

    ok i redid it just a bit let me knwo what you think of it


    During the Medieval Crusades, the christian crusaders had committed many unjustifiable attacks
    against relgious parties to help supply their Holy War, and in the end was a huge reason why
    the Greek Church of Byzantium and the Roman Church of the West were never reunited.

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