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    Exclamation formal letter of application please correct where needed

    Hello,
    please help me to make this letter as correct and clear as posible. I will skip some details on purpose.

    FPMR "E-D"
    Street :# STREET


    <Date>


    <Organization>
    Attn. The Secretary General
    # <street>
    <code><city>

    Dear Mr. <name>

    Ref: membership proposal

    Please accept this letter as our formal application for membership as we have been asked by the <Organization> Executive Secretary.

    FPMR"E-D" (RMPF "E-D"- the name translated in English) jointly represents the the <nationality> maritime pilots which are associated as follows:
    -APMR -maritime pilots for the<sea>ports <port><port>;
    -ADSPA- river-maritime pilots for < river>.

    We will be proud if <Organization> will accept us as member and we will do our best to prove it is worth.

    Looking forward to hearing from you,

    Yours sincerely

    <Title><Name>
    President


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    Re: formal letter of application please correct where needed

    Please !!! Can you waste a little time on me ?!
    It will help me a lot to have it corrected/ confirmed this evening.
    Thank you!
    Cic

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