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    Default please correct my letter and please give me a number as same as IELTS teachers

    Dear Sir,



    I am writing to explain about not being able to return the books, I have borrowed from the library 3 weeks ago, on time. I am a student at your collage. My full name is Jack Anderson. My students number is 121, and my borrower number is 169.


    Actually, I have borrowed three agricultural books for two weeks, and I should returned the books one week age. Unfortunately, I received bad news about my father. As a matter of fact, he was taken to the hospital for emergency operation. As a result, I had to go to Sydney for visiting my father without any beforehand plans. Therefore, I could not return the books last week.

    I would be grateful if you could renew the books for on week later.

    Thank you for your attention to this matter.


    Your Faithfully

    Jack Anderson

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    Default Re: please correct my letter and please give me a number as same as IELTS teachers

    The reply that you received the first time you posted this was good.

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