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    Please correct the paragraph below

    If I get any problem in my personal life. surely I'll reach you.
    At home,parents are in a hurry to get me married. But I am defering my acceptance for marriage. Luckily, there are no marriage proposals for us . I would like to stay in the same company for a couple of years and have bank balance. I think it is a good decision to do so.

    Both of you are staying away from parents but some elders guidance is required in the initial stage of marital life. Sometimes, I think what you did regarding marriage is almost correct.You are one among the people who get mails from my mail box. I will be available all the time.

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    Re: Please correct the paragraph below

    Looks fine to me.

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    Re: Please correct the paragraph below

    Quote Originally Posted by ramanji View Post
    If I get any problem in my personal life. surely I'll reach you.
    At home,parents are in a hurry to get me married. But I am defering my acceptance for marriage. Luckily, there are no marriage proposals for us . I would like to stay in the same company for a couple of years and have bank balance. I think it is a good decision to do so.

    Both of you are staying away from parents but some elders guidance is required in the initial stage of marital life. Sometimes, I think what you did regarding marriage is almost correct.You are one among the people who get mails from my mail box. I will be available all the time.
    hi
    no need to repeat for marriage

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