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    Please help me make this sound better

    This will be an informal breakfast for you to meet Assad. He wants to take this opportunity to get to know each of you.

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    Re: Please help me make this sound better

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    This will be an informal breakfast for you to meet Assad. He wants to take this opportunity to get to know each of you.
    It is difficult to change these sentences without knowing all the details. They are both fine, however, I will try.

    "I hope you will enjoy the informal breakfast I have arranged for you to attend. Assad is looking forward to getting to know each of you."

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