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    You always wanted to look at your best but we always exceeded your expectations. You always wanted to charm others with your beautiful looks but our designs always created the aura of exquisiteness around you.
    You wanted to look a little more beautiful but we made you extra more gorgeous, omega jewellery, the jewel of the beauty.

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    Exclamation Re: Kindly check for grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    You always want to look at your best but we are committed to exceed your expectations. You always want to charm others with your beautiful looks but our exclusive designs have always created a special cultured aura of exquisiteness around you. You want to look a little more beautiful but we have made you extra more gorgeous, omega jewellery, the jewel of the beauty.
    You have used expression like "always", so better to express the text in simple present than simple past.

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    You always wanted to look your best, we always exceeded your expectations
    You always wanted to charm others with your beauty, our designs always created that aura of exquisiteness about you.
    You wanted to look more beautiful, we made you extra gorgeous.

    Omega Jewellery - The jewel of the beauty.
    I think this is the sort of thing you are getting at.

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    Quote Originally Posted by thod00 View Post
    I think this is the sort of thing you are getting at.
    Thanks and ya indeed i was looking for this style

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