For the making of the 50 Euro many of the rewriting is I think to need. Not enough for mistake of the grammar alone. Thinks me Bhai is good for the writing with.
Even in the corrected form, presented in the previous post, it is clearly not the work of a native speaker. Almost every sentence could be phrased more elegantly. This is the question I have to consider when looking at the pieces presented in this forum. To simply correct the grammar, or to rewrite into a more natural form? Correct grammar can still leave the piece seeming clumsy. For a paid service, I would assume the client would want it to the best of my ability, which would be a rewrite.