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    Default Re: correct this short essay

    Perhaps the best thing would be to see how simple you can make it. Then add things to make it beautiful and expresive. What do you think?






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    Default Re: correct this short essay

    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    Perhaps the best thing would be to see how simple you can make it. Then add things to make it beautiful and expresive. What do you think?





    well you r right, but the skillful writer choose a more complicated english while doing.

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