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    topoftheclass is offline Newbie
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    dangling modifier

    I need help rephrasing this sentence:

    In addition to the benefits of our strategic
    location, our outstanding labor force,
    our modern infrastructure and the best education
    and human development ranking
    in Mandanga, Namor State’s people are its
    greatest asset.

    maybe something along these lines:

    Namor's people are its/our greatest asset. In addition to that, we can offer...


    Thank you in advance

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    susiedqq is offline Key Member
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    Re: dangling modifier

    Namor has a strategic
    location, outstanding labor force,

    modern infrastructure, and the best education
    and human development ranking
    in Mandanga. But Namor's greatest asset is its people.

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