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    Smile Please correct :)

    Hi,

    I'm writing to reguest information about the item bought from you on xxx - baby slippers. That was from my partner account xxxxxxxxxx. We still didn't received it or get any information about such a delay. When can we expect delivery or our money back? Hope to receive an early reply from you.

    With regards,

    Kate

    Please make changes if needed. Thank you very much

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    Re: Please correct :)

    How about this: you must be very firm with companies that take your money and promise delivery of goods.


    I'm writing to reguest information about an order placed with you on (Date): Baby slippers Item # Color:

    The order was paid by (Credit card, Debit Card # ???) xxxxxxxxxx.

    We still have not received the item or get any information regarding a possible delay. When can we expect delivery?

    We will cancel the order if we do not hear from you within 7 days and dispute the payment.

    Please respond ASAP.

    With regards,

    Kate

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    Re: Please correct :)

    Thanks a lot!!!

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    Re: Please correct :)

    Last sentence should be:

    We will cancel the order and dispute the charges if we do not hear from you within 7 days.

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