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    Hi Dani ,

    Sorry for such late reply but we had some Internet problems.

    Its a shame that u don't want me to do both things (I could get another trade
    name for cleanings and i don't think that it would be a problem) but if i need
    to choose just one for obvious reasons it will be inventories.

    As you should know, the prices that you have suggested are way below the market
    price for the inventories. Because we didn't agreed the price before I was doing
    those inventories, I don't have any other choice but to accept suggested prices
    for inventories that I've already done.

    As an attachment I'm sending you my price list that I'm using and if you want me
    to continue with inventories at xxxx i can put it down maximum xx for
    you witch will be:

    Studio/1 Bedroom xx
    2 Bedrooms xx
    3 Bedrooms xx
    4 Bedrooms xx

    Other thing that i can offer is to do the check out, for already done by me
    inventories, with no charge. I believe the prices offered by me are very fair
    and acceptable.
    Please let me know about your decision.

    Your sincerely

    Kate
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    Thanks

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    Default Re: Please check and make corrections ;)

    Say:
    Because we didn't agree to the price before I did the inventory....

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    Default Re: Please check and make corrections ;)

    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
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    Because we didn't agree to the price before I did the inventory....
    RonBee, I have a question.

    Shouldn't this be this? Because we hadn't agreed to the price before I did the inventory? Please correct me if I'm wrong because I'm weak at English.

    Thanks.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Saad_1 View Post
    RonBee, I have a question.

    Shouldn't this be this? Because we hadn't agreed to the price before I did the inventory? Please correct me if I'm wrong because I'm weak at English.
    Can you give me a good reason why I should change my suggestion?


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    Quote Originally Posted by kasiajez View Post
    Sorry for such late reply but we had some Internet problems.
    Sorry for the late reply. We had some Internet problems.
    Quote Originally Posted by kasiajez View Post
    Its a shame that u don't want me to do both things
    It's a shame that you don't want me to do both things.

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    Default Re: Please check and make corrections ;)

    Quote Originally Posted by kasiajez View Post
    Hi Dani ,

    Sorry for such late reply but we had some Internet problems.

    Its a shame that you don't want me to do both things (I could get another company to do the cleanings and I don't think that it would be a problem) but if I need to choose just one for obvious reasons it will be the inventories.

    As you should know, the prices that you have suggested are way below the market values for the items on the inventories. However, since we didn't agree on the prices before I prepared those inventories, I don't have any other choice but to accept your suggested prices for inventories that I've already done.

    As an attachment I'm sending you my price list that I'm using and if you want me to continue with inventories for xxxx i can put it down maximum xx for you which will be:

    Studio/1 Bedroom xx
    2 Bedrooms xx
    3 Bedrooms xx
    4 Bedrooms xx

    Other thing that i can offer is to do the check out, for already done by me
    inventories, with no charge. I believe the prices offered by me are very fair
    and acceptable. Please let me know about your decision.

    Your sincerely

    Kate
    _______________________________________
    Please check and make corrections It's important for me
    Thanks
    ..

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    Thank you very much Anglika :)

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