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    Back to that time, I was alone in facing such a frightening situation. I need to take my respective place in that new world, the nursery school. I need to breed the self-confidence to overcome my fears of the unknown. Effectively, I didn't know a single child in my class and I had to trust my instinct to aim for the good ones. This way, I hoped to avoid certain potential problems.

    Luckily for me, I found, since the very first minutes of my school journey, somebody who carried on his face a beautiful smile. That smile went hand in hand with his shiny eyes and inspired faith to me. That person who seemed so attractive wore the name of Kim. She appeared to me like a life jacket in that unknown sea. Her personality complemented with mine. The qualities of one filled the defects of the other and vice versa. We sponged off every moment we spent together during which we laughed until we cried. We shared the same visions of life, we represented soul mates but in a friendship version...


    In brief, we helped each other to get through the different pitfalls which were destined to take place in our existence. Without her presence in my life, I must admit that this particular period would have represented a bigger obstacle to overcome.


    However, before we started our first grade after a marvellous summer spent outside to play from the sunrise to that fabulous show which represented sunset, she and her family decided to turn over a new leaf because her father heard through the grapevine that an interesting job was not filled in Quebec city. Not long after that decision, she left for the capital and since that day, I have never seen her shiny face again. When I still think of this dreary fact today, a bitter feeling of dread overcomes me: lost a loved one
    cannot considered as an easy thing to forget.



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    Why have you posted the same stories you posted before?


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    re: First Day of School

    This is the only thing I could improve. I'm sure not... Can you help me because I need it for today... Thank you...

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