Question: There are many differents types of music in the world today . Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowdays?
It is undoubtedly true that there are many different types of music in several languages. Therefore, it is not reasonable to say that music does not affect a person's life, so in the reality of the situation in which we live, we found that people do not care about the language or types of music, despite the existence of the category of people in favor of international music, other people say that the traditional music is more important and more fun than international music .
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