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Sub : Wrongly debited bank charges of Rs.90/- in my A/c
I would like to inform you that on chekcing my bank statement, I find that it has been wrongly debited with bank charges of Rs.90/- on dt.09/03/2008 due to the failure of a cheque to clear as it was sent to a local clearing house rather than an out-station one. Since I completed the deposit slip correctly, this is the bank's error, and therefore it is my contention than no charges should be made for this failed payment. Please credit the Rs90/- back into my account no xxxxxx as soon as possible and confirm when this has been done. Your prompt action in this matter will be welcome.
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