I will be happy to try to help you with this essay. I would like to give you a small tip that will help you next time you write an essay. In English, words change their form depending on the usage within a sentence. In order for you to know which part of speech to use, go to the a dictionary and look up that word. You can click on the word 'dictionary' to go to an online dictionary. If you use this link, you must scroll down to about the half-way point on the page to the section titled 'Translation'. Here, the dictionary will tell you which form is used for each situation.
The courage of a lion (this is a noun, in the dictionary it will show n. after the word) - The courageous woman. (this is an adjective, in the dictionary it will show adj..) - She courageously climbed up the steep cliffs (This is an adverb - adv..)
I hope this is not confusing to you. I will correct your essay in the next post.
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